After reading chapter six of Strong’s book, I can’t help but
think about one of the opening quotes by “Darth Vader.” He says, “using writing
to discipline students is a wonderful approach… coupling punishment with fear,
we can virtually guarantee non-writers later on.” Of course he is writing in a
sarcastic tone when he refers to it as a wonderful approach, but I really
wanted to elaborate on this quote because it brought back some vivid memories
of my own schooling.
I think teachers simply, and without worry, correlate
punishment with writing. When do you ever see teachers “punish” a student by
making them sit and solve math problems, or read a science textbook? It just
doesn’t happen. It must have something to do with the mechanical movement
involved when a pen is introduced to paper. Whatever it may be, it makes teachers
believe writing can be used as a form of punishment. However, coupling writing
and punishment makes it that much harder for teachers to implement writing in
their classrooms, especially English teachers. If the students are constantly
forced to write as punishment, they are never going to enjoy it.
I can’t help but remember being punished with writing in my
middle school gym class. I was constantly forced to sit at a desk, in a corner,
and write on a piece of paper “I will not chew gum in physical education
class.” I had to write the entire period, front and back, on multiple pieces of
paper (yet they constantly stressed the fact that students should be active 60
minutes a day- and here I was, writing for 60 minutes, when in all reality I
could have used the exercise at this point in my life). Anyway, can you guess
what happened when I handed those papers in? No, they were not graded or kept
on file; they were ripped up right in front of my face and thrown in the trash.
So, as a student, how am I supposed to form a relationship with writing when it
is constantly being used as a form of punishment? I’m honestly surprised that I
enjoy writing today, because these memories are so vivid. Luckily, I have not
become one of these “non-writers” Darth Vader speaks about, but this is what he
was getting at! If we continue to couple writing with punishment and fear, we
can guarantee non-writers later on. Students are simply not going to want to
write if it is viewed negatively and used as a form of punishment.
Before I wrap up this blog post, I wanted to incorporate a
CRAFT I could implement in my own classroom. In case you didn’t know, I am a
huge fan of cells, and so this is my CRAFT on cells! Feel free to critique.
Imagine we inject you into a eukaryotic or prokaryotic cell
(the choice is yours!) We want you to slip on your water shoes and goggles, and
swim around the cell. Explain to your peers the various organelles you see, the
functions that are taking place, and observe the relative location of these
organelles in relation to each other. After making your observations, create a
map (similar to that of a city) depicting what you saw. Include streets and
landmarks. Label each street with a name (for example the exterior of the cell
can be called Cell Circle, or the street near the Golgi Apparatus, Golgi
Boulevard). Be creative! It doesn’t just have to include the organelles. Draw
in some houses, or some of your favorite restaurants. But, the position of
organelles should be fairly accurate with respect to one another. Finally,
remember to add some color! We want your friends to be interested in the
interior of a cell as well!
Context: Development of a cell city/Map
Role: Observer/Architect/Developer
Audience: Your peers that you want to educate about the cell
Format: Map
Topic: Cell organization




